I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, July 1, 2020
My pick a path story
Hi today we had to do a pick a path story, if you don't know what a pick a path story is, it's like a journey and you get to pick the choices that go in the story every thing you pick makes a different ending some are deadly and some are peacefully so just have fun here is mine.
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hi phoebe! i love this writing. this reminds me about creepy things which i like. next time you you could show all the charcters at the end. one queston how long did it take you to make this. by Eliza
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